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Review #1, by Slytherin_for_the_win Are those Wedding Bells I Hear?

8th January 2014:
I loved the wedding scene, it was very easy to imagine in my head.

I noticed one mistake worth mentioning. When they're dancing, James mentions that he's going to be head boy, but when they're on the train, the Ravenclaw asks why he's a prefect. It really confused me! :P

Sirius Black, what a smooth man! Lol. And I can't wait to see the Remus/Abbey relationship flare up... Not to mention Lily and James'! How on earth is he going to win her love and affection??

Update quickly!

Author's Response: Thank you for that noticing that mistake! I have edited it and it is awaiting validation! And that is exactly how i imagine Sirius, very smooth! I think that he is the type of person who can make a fool of himself yet not make a fool of himself. Remus and Abbey's relationship is probably the pairing i like the best! They are both to shy to say anything and i think it is absolutely adorable! As for lily and James... You will have to wait and find out!
Thank you for reading!
Xoxoxoxo
Sam


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