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Review #1, by oldershouldknowbetter The day of the battle

17th October 2014:
I plan to review at least one chapter of anyone's stories who review mine. So here I am.

I have to agree with the previous reviewer, this is really quite an adorable little story and it's a scene I never envisioned. I'd forgotten about Ginny's temper and how after the events of the battle she might be just a little bit angry. This was a good scene to put those feelings in order so that they could be together.

You really do need to fix up your spelling. For instance in nearly every instance you used threw when you should have used through.

Liked your story, would like to see you do more.

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Review #2, by GinnyGryffindor The day of the battle

14th November 2013:
Cute :D some grammar mistakes, but all around a really adorable story :D

Author's Response: When I get my computer working I am thinking of continue the story.


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