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Review #1, by patronus_charm Forever Young

12th July 2014:
Hi!

No, this was too sad and I wonít allow you to destroy me with all the feels! :P ♥ I really loved this idea of fear with Fred as it was just so unique and so different. I really wouldnít have seen it coming until I read this story but the weird thing is that it the fear made complete sense with the way he was always the jokier and more exuberant one of the two and perhaps that was to cling onto his youthfulness.

I really liked how you used Aunt Muriel as an example too as she must have been pretty terrifying so it was really fitting here. Gah, typical Fred making light out of his death even though I just want to cry so much right now. I guess it worked so well with his character and him no longer needing his fear I should be happy but I just canít be. Such a fab story though!

-Kiana
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Review #2, by tomatina Forever Young

9th March 2014:
The end was heartbreaking for me honestly...but I loved your story. :) It was interesting that it was in the second person and I loved the description. I could never put something so eloquently and leave so much emotion with just just two sentences, but your last two sentences really toyed with my emotions and made me think. Frankly, they were incredible. This is an amazing story.

Author's Response: The end, ah, I cried a little if I'm being completely honest.

Thank you so much for leaving such a lovely review!

Sam.


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Review #3, by alicia and anne Forever Young

6th March 2014:
I love how you effortlessly moved from him being eight to being in the battle. It's strange what your mind thinks of during certain situations.

I am so sad right now though, to think that Fred's fear was growing old and now he'll never grow older.

This was amazingly written and I feel so sad now. :(

Author's Response: It just felt right, how I did it. I'm glad you like it. :)

I know, it made me sad, too. We can be sad together. *hugs*

Thank you so much for leaving a review!

Sam.


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Review #4, by ShadowRose Forever Young

1st March 2014:
Hello! I'm here for the Gryffindor/Slytherin Blackout Battle!

First off, I absolutely adore stories written in second person. It's so personal-sounding, and gives the story this haunted feeling - like you're listening to a voice inside your head. It's such a short piece, but it's so loaded with emotion too. I really love the premise for this as well - Fred having a fear of growing old. It definitely seems like something believable for someone known for his childish behaviour, and it makes his early death all that much more powerful.

I love your characterization of Fred - he's an instantly relatable character. I also love how quickly, yet smoothly, you're able to transition through time periods. The whole piece feels connected, even though it takes place over a large span of years. It's so heartwrenching too, seeing little Fred fret about growing old, and then reaching the point where he never has to. It's such heart-wrenching irony, and gosh darn it, you're bringing up a lot of Fred feels and I just - augh.

This piece was just so beautifully written - short and charged, which I think works perfectly. The repetition of the "I don't want to look like that" is great, and shows Fred's fear while also reminding the reader that, no, Fred won't ever look like that. The story ends on such a haunting note too: "You'll never grow old now." It's so heartbreaking and powerful, and just, wow. I'm actually out of words at this point.

This was absolutely heartwrenching and breathtaking and everything in between. Great job with this story - I thought it was amazing!

-ShadowRose (Taylor)

Author's Response: Hello, Taylor!

Yes, I agree with second person sounding so personal; it's the reason I chose to write it this way. It made it all feel more real in my head, more... haunted. Yes. When I got the premise of fearing growing old for the challenge and Fred as the character, the irony had me staring at the screen for a minute. But it made a bigger impact on his death and I couldn't resist.

I'm glad; that's what I wanted. I didn't really think about the transition when I was writing, the beginning was just a memory during the war, but when I got it written down and read it through, I was very happy with how it fit. Fred feels - I had a lot, too.

Short and charged seemed so much more powerful than if I'd tried to make it longer. I stopped when it felt right. Oh, the end; it was so sad to right. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Thank you so much for leaving a review!

Sam.


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Review #5, by MissesWeasley123 Forever Young

25th October 2013:
Oh, this is so perfect.

The idea is so original. So great and just fabulous. I adore you for coming up with this. It is magnificent and breath-taking. Honestly.

You just did Fred so well. Second person was absolutely amazing to read. It was your first time, right? It worked so well though. I'm struggling to find words to say... honestly. Just brilliantly done.

Your comparison to Muriel was really clever. I liked it a lot. I really hope you win this challenge, because this was so well written.

Absolutely gorgeous!

Author's Response: Thank you! I was so nervous about this, not only because it was a canon character but because it was Fred and it was sad. So, I'm very happy that you like it and that you thought second person worked well, it was a new thing for me. :)

Thank you so much for leaving a review!

Sam.


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Review #6, by ATLpaintingflowers Forever Young

25th October 2013:
ASDFGHJKL! I really, really, really shouldn't be reviewing this so early, but I honestly couldn't wait. This is one of those stories that I couldn't wait to read from the time I issued Fred and the fear of growing old. I was dying waiting for this, lol. Let me begin by saying you are like probably one of the most original author's out there, and I was pleasantly surprised when I started reading this, because I hadn't expected this story to go the way it did. Your characterisation, transitions, everything is perfect as usual. This one-shot kind of tore my heart out, but made me extremely happy at the same time. I would love to see this as a short story, I think I would die of fangirling. But yes, this is a great story, and I enjoyed reading it so much
~Naomi

Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much for the amazing compliments! I'm so glad that you liked it. It was very new for me, so I was nervous about writing it and how it would come out, but I quite liked the result and I'm happy you did, too.

Thank you so much for the challenge and for leaving a review!

Sam.


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Review #7, by The Misfit Forever Young

24th October 2013:
SAM!

I really shouldn't be adding to your pile of unanswered reviews, but I just had to leave a review on this! ♥ Although it's shorter than I would have liked, you really portray the Weasley family well in this.

Fred Weasley and the fear of growing old, how ironic :P I really like this one-shot, although I would suggest making it longer and fleshing out the time expanse between when he's eight and 20. I do love the way you describe Muriel though, it sounds really authentic from an eight-year-old boy's perspective!

Absolutely lovely one-shot! ♥

Author's Response: ISOBEL!

A longer one-shot would have meant ripping out my heart (I sold my soul for what I did to Nicky).

Yes, the heart wrenching irony. What a combination, eh? :P

Thank you so much, I'm so happy you like the descriptions of Muriel and the Weasleys. I get nervous about canon characters. :)

Thank you for leaving a review!

Sam.


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