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Review #1, by mm The Beginning

26th October 2013:
This is amazing, eagerly wait for an update 10/10

Author's Response: Wow, thanks for such a great rating! So thrilled to know you're enjoying it, and I'll post a second chapter hopefully soon!

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Review #2, by puddlemere The Beginning

26th October 2013:
Ah this was so good! I like Bridget so far, she seems like a great main character and I'm looking forward to knowing more about her. I was really annoyed though, because Albus seemed so nice and sweet and awkward but then he turned out to be a massive idiot. It is nice to see an Albus that's more like the typical James though. I feel like Al's often portrayed as the shy quiet one who's really nice, so I can't wait to see what direction you're gonna take him in.
I'm really looking forward to reading more about Bridget and the rest of your characters, and I never know how to end a review, but thanks for posting such a brill first chapter!
(I also love that that Bri says "brill" because I do that all the time and it's just a small thing but it made me smile.)

Author's Response: Thank you! Bri's a little clueless, but I think she'll stay like that to the end, unlike Albus, apparently! There might be a little plot twist in the near future, so don't give up on him yet! And I say that too! Such a fun word, me thinks~

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Review #3, by lea_ The Beginning

24th October 2013:
Hello, hello!
I really enjoyed the first chapter, Bri is completely adorkable and Al is proving to be an interesting character.
The dialog is great, but perhaps the chapters could be a teensy bit longer since the dialog takes up so much? (More of a request than criticism, haha).
Hope you post more soon :)

Author's Response: Hee hello!

Yes, yes >D I have my plans for these babies~ Hopefully you can stick around to see them grow! You never know, Albus may even redeem himself :3 And of course! I can totally try that, and thank you for the lovely review!


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Review #4, by HerEyesOnMeGazing The Beginning

24th October 2013:
Awww, cute! I like it a lot so far. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you liked it x

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Review #5, by Maidstone The Beginning

24th October 2013:
I like this story so far!

Author's Response: So glad you do! ^_^
I'd love for you to stick around with it a bit longer x


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