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Review #1, by ginnypotter242 The Magic of Starlight

7th July 2014:
Aww, this was adorable. I love Scorpius and Rose together! I like that you made them best friends first too. The family reactions to their friendship were spot on as well- trust Ron to be distracted by Quidditch!

I love this song, and you fit it in so well. I liked the plot, and how you made Scorpius adventurous and playful, rather than the womanizing or cocky characterization I see a lot. The ending was very sweet, and I loved that it was Rose that made the first move.

I think that the pov switch was a little unnecessary- if anything, just having a line break between them would be easier and less distracting. I'd like it if Scorpius' pov was longer, and we got to see his view on more of the night!

I liked that Scorpius kept slipping up and calling Rose "Rosie". It was cute, especially when he got nervous about her hexing him. I really liked this fic, it was very sweet :)

~Sara (House Cup 2014 Review)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review! I love getting feedback!

This story really was so much fun to write and the first time I heard the song I knew it fit the Rose/Scorpius pairing perfectly!

Writing Scorpius' POV was interesting for me (especially since he's so different from Rose). I'm considering coming back eventually and writing more from his POV, I think seeing how he felt during the kiss part would be particularly interesting!

Thanks so much again!


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Review #2, by Sharvi The Magic of Starlight

24th November 2013:
That was so beautiful! I'm surprised no one has reviewed this before. The entire night reminded me of something from the movie Monte Carlo. Love Rose and Scorpius =)

Author's Response: My first review ever!! Thanks so much! I'm so happy you liked it!

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