Great story!!! Plz update!!! Report Review
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Naughty Carrie, mustn't cheat on b/f;'s NO NO NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is a great story, keep wrighting, Arwen ElessarAuthor's Response: Hey, thanks. ^_^ Report Review
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Hey, that was pretty good, sis, but I agree with kent. It needs more substance. :) Report Review
Very cool!! I love it?! Report Review
A fair start, but needs more substance. Build it up more. A good premise with good characters Report Review
this is a great idea you\'ve got, but you\'ve left us unable to decide where your going with this. don\'t get us wrong, you\'ve started out good. but write more! Report Review
ooh! keep going! Liz Report Review
hmmm.this is sort of interesting.Please write more so we can find out more Report Review
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