Reading Reviews for Before it all turned black
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Review #1, by Celeste Unknown places and the Bro Code

1st April 2015:
So far I am loving this story. I can't wait to see more of it and see the whole plot unfold. It's like nothing I have ever read before.

I just don't know how to express this it's amazing. Though I'm wondering is she in the same year as James or the same year as Albus, Scorp and Rose?

Other then that I can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: she's seventh year like James :) They pushed each other in the lake their first year hahaha though I have to admit she has a very close relationship with Albus, Scorp and Rose (who are in their 5th year). The next update is coming soon I swear :D

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Review #2, by shena Unknown places and the Bro Code

29th March 2015:
can't wait to see where this story goes, please update soon!

Author's Response: It's coming I promise :) Thanks for reading

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Review #3, by Sharvi Unknown places and the Bro Code

22nd April 2014:
Hey! The story seems to be building up slowly which is good! I was wondering if you could update a little more frequently? It'd be fun to read more on what you've got to write.

Some constructive criticism- I think the site messed up your formatting, so you might want to go back and fix it so it becomes easier to read. Also, until now the characters don't seem to have a lot of depth (even though they are incredibly loud and hilarious) which is fine since you're only 2 chapters in. But maybe if you gave us a little more insight on how the relationships work in certain situations, it might help the audience get more from your characters.

That's my bit done, and I really can't wait to read what you have in store! Oh and one last question, what house is Albus in?

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Review #4, by Sharvi The Beginning of The End

4th November 2013:
Gah, you start off with the main characters death? That's just plain evil, but I really look forward to reading more. Good job on your first chapter :)

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