Reading Reviews for Wounded Warriors
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Review #1, by Gail Dunn Run

12th April 2014:
Another very interesting chapter. Glad you're able to get back to it. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks! Hoping to get more submitted today.

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Review #2, by Sirius_gurl Run

11th April 2014:
I was thrilled to see an update! Great job - love the longer chapters! Glad to see a bit more honesty in Alara and Sev's relationship. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! Honesty is not so easy for our dear Severus, particularly when it comes to his own feelings. He's had to bury them for too long.

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Review #3, by Gail Dunn Bestie

3rd April 2014:
Thanks for the new chapter - looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you! Just submitting a new chapter now. I've lot my editor, and seem to be a bit lost without him, so it's going slower. But I haven't given up!

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Review #4, by Gail Dunn Sunday, October 31, 1999. 4am

14th March 2014:
This trilogy has been very enjoyable! When do you think you might be finishing this one? I read the first 2 in one day and have recommended them to my husband. We're middle aged and huge fans of the series and of the Snape character and think he never got his due. These stories provide a great perspective into his thoughts and feelings. Please continue, I think you're onto something. One tiny criticism meant to be constructive, you may want to have the chapters proofread, I noticed a few spelling issues. Sorry, guess it's the Ravenclaw in me! But once again, well done, great insight into the character, honest in how he would likely have been feeling and thinking, and I was pleased to revisit the school and to see the ideas in the books represented with familiar characters and terminology but with original ideas too. Happy to think of an AU where Snape might finally put some of his demons to rest and have a chance for happiness but as himself, not a dewy eyed adolescent. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! Unfortunately, the hard winter we've had where I live has caused real life to get in the way. I have the rest of the story mapped out, just some decisions I need to make and get it written. I hope to have more posted soon.

Dang those spelling errors. My spell checker doesn't always catch them for some reason.

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Review #5, by Kate Troubled Feast

7th January 2014:
Thank you for the marvellous trilogy. The new characters are brilliantly presented and lovable and the story is gripping, but who'd have known it's not finished yet: cliffhangers are a tormenting thing. Please keep posting!

Why did Alara almost give her relationship with Severus away to Brandon? She'd promised not to. Ok, no more questions, I'll just take it as it is.

Author's Response: Well crap, isn't that a good question?

*fumbles around in her notes for a few minutes desperately seeking a decent answer.*

You know how when Star Trek breaks it's canon they call it "just one of those things" and you roll your eyes because it really means the writer didn't check continuity? Yeah. It's uhm... just one of those things.

Good catch. I'll have to edit that. :-)

Thanks for the heads up!

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Review #6, by Sirius_gurl Happy Halloween

26th October 2013:
So happy to see you posted again! This story is off to a great start, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks! This is a bit more off-the-cuff, usually I wait for the entire story to be done before I post. This is still in progress, but I think I have the early chapters settled enough to start posting.

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