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Review #1, by Nikki Nostalgia

29th October 2013:
your writing skill is very good!! Although you could have labeled on who's who is the point of view, like in the book "The Time Traveler's Wife". Nevertheless, it's great! :D keep on writing fics!

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Review #2, by toomanycurls Nostalgia

28th October 2013:
Hi! I saw this in the new story list and thought I'd take a peek. I really love that you've captured their love story by starting at the wedding, walking back to their first hint of a relationship, and to the point where they started dating. You do a great job at portraying their emotions in very succinct and beautiful ways.

You do a great job shifting through perspectives in the story though it might help to throw in the person's name at least once per session. I assumed that the sections that didn't specify meant James for he but it could be open to interpretation.

I'd this your first ever fic? I see it's the first one under this name. Your writing style shows maturity that some people take years to develop.

Great job!

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