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Review #1, by Burning_Bridges Not For The World

31st October 2013:
Occasionally I was confused by the time skipping (in particular, the scene with Snape needing a haircut), but I really liked it (surprising since I normally dislike second person writing).

Author's Response: I'm sorry you were confused, but the time skipping lends a lot to this particular type of story. In the Snape-needing-a-haircut scene, I feel the point is you don't know whom Lily is talking to, until she says his name. I'm glad you liked it; I think second person generally gets a mixed reception, depending on how it is done. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #2, by WaterLily Not For The World

25th October 2013:
Fabulous! The stream of consciousness in second person truly enhances the story, and it's so rare to see stories out of order - but you made each snippet seem so significant, and so closely mirroring Lily's real thought process. Please write more stories, you have talent!

~WaterLily :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This is a great review - thank you! I'm glad you liked it, and I will try to write more, but this one did take me absolutely ages. I think I started writing it in February! Thanks for reviewing!

- Gred x

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Review #3, by plum Not For The World

22nd October 2013:
um dude. you rock. thiss was beautiful. seriously, you are so amazingg at writing

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That really means a lot. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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