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Review #1, by Karou_Marauder Lost in the Psych Ward

15th March 2014:
Hi there!

Grammar/Typos: None! I couldn't spot any, well done.

Plot and stuff: I like how Lily and James switched almost here,
with James being sensible and Lily being a bit...confused. I
love the bit about Lily grabbing the sides of the bin "groaning
with a resolve only the most practiced actor or most desperate
girl could muster". James seems very nice and pleasant to be
with, which is a side of him I haven't seen much of in fanfiction.
You wrote both of them really well. The whole thing was well-
written and great, so well done!

-Karou

Author's Response: Sorry it took me so long to respond! Thank you so much! Reviews always make my day :)

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