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5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Stunned Chapter 18

13th January 2014:
Loved the ending!
Keep going, I'm enjoying reading your take on the books!
Stunned x

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Review #2, by Rel Chapter 15

30th December 2013:
Great story! Can't wait to read what happens next, hopefully it's soon :D

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Review #3, by dracolover101 Chapter 7

26th November 2013:
this is such a great story!! I love dramione, harry/ginny, ron/pansy and Neville and luna!! those are all great pairs.

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Review #4, by Stunned Chapter 6

17th November 2013:
I really like this story- it just shows how good a simple story can be. The character progression between the individuals and the couples is really impressive, you're writing this really well.
Looking forward to the next chapter! :D
Stunned x

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Review #5, by GinnyFan1 Chapter 1

6th November 2013:
Good concept, but you really need to work on checking your grammar and such. You need to capitalize everything that needs to be, but commas at the end of quotes:
ex:
"They are not her boyfriends," Pansy said.
"The Mudblood was just petrified," Crabbe said.

If you want me to proofread (because this truly is a gripping story, just with a lot of errors) e-mail me at thisisnottheendyet at gmail (it won't let me put links in here). I will be more than happy to help. Love the plot, though.

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