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Review #1, by Aurorofthelight Returning Home

15th October 2013:
You're off to a pretty cool start but it's dragging alittle! I almost thought a dementor was going to show up! I'll be interested to see where you go with this! Keep it coming!

Author's Response: I'm specifically trying to keep it to a slow start, examining the effects of the newly ended war on relationships, characters and setting. It will definitely pick up, but it may take a Chapter or two, as I'm trying to make this a long story (hence the 'novel' category xD ) but thank you very much for the feedback. It's greatly appreaciated. Thank you :)

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Review #2, by njhj A Questionable Future

15th October 2013:
abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz!

Author's Response: Thanks? If that's a good thing, then thank you.

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Review #3, by RomioneShipper15 A Questionable Future

14th October 2013:
i liked it cant wait for chapter 2

Author's Response: Thanks. Should be up shortly :)

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