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Review #1, by icingonmycake Did I just call her beautiful!

9th December 2013:
Nice start! Thanks for checking out my fic Explosion, I thought I would check out yours too. I like the chapter, the only thing is that you need to make it a little more believable that is really Draco Malfoy, our very own Foul, Evil Little Cockroach! He would be a lot more believable if he was resenting the fact that he could think like this, even though it's only in his mind and no one can know. Oh, btw, chapt 8 of my fic is up and 9th in the queue. Thanks and Happy Writing!

Author's Response: Thanx for the advice i an going to edit it straight away i love your,story its great.

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Review #2, by lizzi:):):) Did I just call her beautiful!

25th November 2013:
It doesn't have an option for 90 out of 10 so the closest was 10 so whatever.
Wow B.
You should become a proper writer, like seriously I
can barely write a sentcne without messing up.
(You see what I did there?!)

Is this good enough (and not too sarcastic)

Author's Response: Love you so much lizzi%3A%29%3A%29%3A%29 your the best thanx for your review xx

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