Reading Reviews for The Break Up
3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Cannons The Break Up

26th October 2013:
I'm here with the first of many reviews I promised you! 25 :o ahah I'm super tired right now but wanted to get a review done for you so you didn't think I was going to go back on my promise, so if it's a bit short apologies!


This was a fun read, gossip and rumours were rife at Hogwarts.


Your OC seems a tad...insecure? I'm not sure if that's the right word, but I feel bad for James now. I guess she reacted in the immediate aftermath of the break up, but she was positively devious when she interacted with Stacey! I'm sure I'll grow to like her though even though I'm uncertain of her motives at the moment.

I wish there was another chapter up already so I could read on, but I'm going to guess that they eventually get back together? am I right? AM I RIGHT?

Your next review will be more detailed and awesome but I needed to review one for you so you didn't think I was lying!


Author's Response: YAY!!! Do you know how awesome you are? You are so awesome! The most awesome person in the whole world! You should get a badge or icon or something so that people know how awesome you are. :D (Also if you're reading earlier stuff... don't judge me too harshly haha :P)

Thank you so much! I fell in love with that banner on TDA and I needed it! So that's where this story came from. And yes I shall be updating it, although I'm not sure how quickly because of NaNo. I shall try my hardest though to update soon.

She is quite insecure, she wants to look the best in the situation and she wants people to not think badly of her. which is going to happen when/if people find out about her spreading of rumours that are untrue.

Aw you're so sweet!! Er. I'm not actually sure? I haven't really planned that far ahead. but I could possibly work that in? :P

Thank you so so so much!! I never thought that you were lying! You have a lot of reviews ahead of you :D You're so amazing!

Thank you! *squishes with a massive hug*

 Report Review

Review #2, by xMsFiggx The Break Up

23rd October 2013:
Interesting. I am curious as to why it would be a problem if people thought one person broke up with the other. Rumors spread everywhere, and as long as James and Stacey know what happened, they should be ok. I'm interested to know what comes next!! I suppose James won't be thrilled that people are hearing Stacey broke up with him.

Author's Response: I shall hopefully be updating this soon, I'm hoping that Nano doesn't get in the way too much. Thank you for reading and reviewing! :D

 Report Review

Review #3, by The Misfit The Break Up

8th October 2013:

I really like this novella so far; it's an interesting premise! Rumours are definitely a part of life at Hogwarts and it's fun to see how Stacey's rumours backfired on her :P

I'd suggest breaking up that big paragraph near the top to make it easier to read (although I might just need glasses) ;)

Overall, I really like this story and I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Author's Response: YAY! I'm so glad!! :D

I'm so glad that you like it! Oh her rumours are going to backfire on her so badly. :D It's going to be fun writing this!

Oppps, thank you hun! I've changed it now :D

Thank you so much!! I shall write the next chapter once I've planned it :D

 Report Review
If this is your story and you wish to respond to reviews, please login