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Review #1, by loonyforever Surprises

26th November 2013:
I didn't know which story you wanted me to review, but here is my expert opinion (joke). It was really good, and I'm not just saying that. I do think that it was a little abrupt of James to just tell Lily that he liked her, but then she would have had to be really thick to not notice by then.
But it was a great beginning :)

One logistical question: don't you have to be a prefect to be Head Boy or Girl? Just wondering :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your feedback! Yeah, I feel like it was a little rough, but with the way I want to take it, I thought it may be best. I want to portray Lily as really insecure, so I don't think she would have picked up on it unless it was outright stated. But you made a very good point! And yes, typically you would, but I'm just following canon :) Jo decided to bend the rules for these two I suppose :)

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