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Review #1, by TheGirlOnFire The Orphanage

14th March 2014:
Hello, this is for the blackout bingo:)

So, this was nice. No really this was really good. I really enjoyed reading this. It's a well written piece, a really great start for your story. I found myself sympathising with the children and feeling sorry for Adriana for being in such a position. But it's nice to see she doesn't shirk her duty and blame the children for the position she's in. This first chapter already shows what a great person she is, it shows how strong she is when she could just give up and go work somewhere else. Her love for the children really shows. I'm really excited to see where this may go. Keep going, :)


Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! It really means a lot that you're enjoying it. I'll add more chapters soon I've just been busy with school. Thank you again!

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