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Review #1, by Unwritten Curse Calla's Story

11th January 2014:
Hi there! I chose this story because the banner was gorgeous and I adore Fred. But I wasn't expecting such an interesting story from an Original Character to be thrown in as well. Looks like I picked a winner!

Fred's method of coping is spot on. He jokes about it, but I'm sure later on it'll hit him and he'll have to mourn what he's lost. It makes his joking all the more sad.

When Calla first began her story, I thought she was somehow going to end up being the Grey Lady, but I know that happened long before the 20th century and that her name wasn't Calla. I liked the ending much better than what I was imagining. In love with Tom Riddle! Wow. It's definitely believable that he'd lure a Muggle girl in and then dispose of her. Heartbreaking, but believable. Poor thing. I hope that she somehow learns to let it go and is able to move on. She seems so sweet and innocent.

I would've liked to see a bit more description about this version of King's Cross. We learn that it's white, but not much else. I see you'll be adding another chapter, so hopefully that is added in. I'm totally ready for fog and other spooky details. ;)

If you don't mind, I'm going to run off and review another one-shot. I usually like leaving at least two reviews for these swaps.

-- Gina

Author's Response: Hi!

Ugh, I know! I wish I had as much talent in my body that easterlies has in their pinky! And yay for Fred! Ooh, a winner you say? I shall read on!

Yes, I am quite sad about his joking to compensate, but it is Fred's way.

Hmm... that is interesting. And yay for good endings! Yes, Tom Riddle is not a good man. Poor Calla. Well, I really need to write the second (and final) chapter of this, but hopefully the continuation helps Calla's happiness shine through.

Okay: description. I shall definitely add more of that! Ooh fog! I hadn't thought of that, but amazing suggestion! Shall be going on the list of things that need to be added to this chapter... :S

Ooh yay! I still haven't gotten around to your second chapter review, but I'm hoping to get through all of my unanswered reviews today and then get onto that ASAP!

Thanks so much!

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Review #2, by lindslo2012 Calla's Story

11th November 2013:
OH. MY. GOSH. This was amazing! I would have never guessed Voldemort until the end but this was just perfect. :) Great job with this!!!

Author's Response: YAY!
I'm glad you liked it!
And yay for mystery until the end!
Thank you!

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Review #3, by Jill Calla's Story

10th October 2013:
This is different, I like it. Update soon? this is so good.

Author's Response: Thank you!
I'll try to update soon, but I can't promise anything...
Sorry :S
But thank you so much!

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Review #4, by someone Calla's Story

10th October 2013:
Um, this is awesome. Like, really good. My mind is blown away. This is fabulous. I can't wait for the next chappie. Seriously.


Author's Response: Um, *you* are awesome!
And super nice!
Thank you for this magical review!
And I'll try to update soon (of course, there will only ever be one update), but I have about eight chapters for other stories that need to be put up, so it might not be too soon (sorry about that).
Thank you!

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