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Review #1, by TheWizardingPorcupine Candy and Kittens

11th November 2013:
Really good story, I can't wait til Chloris gets to Hogwarts?
Is Chloe going to be in Sirius's year? I think it would be better if she was a gryffindor one year below him, and he makes fun of her so she mocks him back.
Greats beginning, plz update soon! I'm giving a 9/10 4 one reason only: chapters r too small, plz elaborate on details of the story!

Author's Response: Mhm! I also can't wait until she gets to Hogwarts. The chapter in the train is going so very painfully slow D: I've actually already set it up so that they are in the same year, but I'll do my best to make it seem like she is more naive than Sirius. Ack. Okay. I'll try to make the chapters more detailed. The train chapter is going to be a longer one since it is so important. ^.^ Thanks for reviewing! :D

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Review #2, by naflower05 Prologue

27th September 2013:
Interesting story so far! I'm excited to see where it goes. I wonder what happened to her parents! Did that really leave her behind, or is there something fishy happening? Update again soon please!! =]

Author's Response: Aw thank you! I'm glad you like it so far! Yes, something fishy did happen to her parents. They wouldn't leave their daughter behind, but you'll have to find out! ^.^
-Emily


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Review #3, by Alicja Prologue

26th September 2013:
That was a nice chapter Emily. Personally though I don't like how he jumped to the conclusion of adopting her. It's one thing to want to protect the baby, but it's another to adopt her. All of it as a total is interesting and makes me wonder what's taking you so long to write more. Please get the writer's block out of your head cause there are so many ways you could go with this.

Author's Response: Awww thank you ^.^ Well... if you saw a baby who had no parents, you would feel bad for him or her too right? And don't worry. I already have a few chapters written, but I was stuck on one of the later chapters :)
-Emily


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