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Review #1, by Death_Eater Lover Clarity

8th October 2013:
I love the song clarity so I had to read this and see what you;re take on it was and it's quite well, if a bit wordy for a one shot.

I have to say that I love how it felt like there was a history there and how everyone seemed to have something to offer up. Even that silly scene with the Marauders felt right and provided something authentic for the audience. Regulus is always conflicting and while you gave him limited screen time I liked how you described Dorcas' feelings and impressions of him while leaving out the mystery of his entire being.

Also, was the end supposed to be a sign of Voldemort possessing Regulus to kill Dorcas? Just curious :)

Anyways, if you wanted you could have made a novel off of this story; maybe as a prequel to this or something. I would read it.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and responding!

The end was supposed to hint at Voldemort controlling Regulus by Legilimency to kill Dorcas. Creative licensing on my end but the only thing we knew about her was that Voldemort killed her.

I'm flattered that you think I could make a novel prequel to this. I really hadn't given it any thought.


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