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Review #1, by Nerdface How I got stuck with Pettigrew

26th October 2013:
Really good chapter. I want more! Some mistakes but thats okay, ur awesome at writing!

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Review #2, by Okay? Okay. How I got stuck with Pettigrew

26th October 2013:
What did I just read...

Okay so your characterizations are REALLY off. I think they could use a bit of work, and honestly, people during the Marauder Era wouldn't talk like that. Better descriptions too. Some of it was kinda funny I guess but could use a LOT of work. The main girl is too queen beeish. I hope you fix it up, this story has potential, just needs tweaking.

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