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Review #1, by The personification of awesome Chapter 2. Sixth Year, Invitations and the Chess Champion of Ravenclaw Tower.

7th January 2014:
I actually like Clayton... PLOT TWIST: KYRA ENDS UP WITH HIM INSTEAD OF ONE OF THE THOUSAND GUYS WHO ARE HEAD OVER HEELS WITH HER. Just kidding, she and James are far too cute together for that.
Seriously though... Everybody likes her. I bet she doesn't have a boyfriend because people take the hand-holding-with-Scorpius thing the wrong way.

Looking forward to the next update! Keep going strong :)

And I'm not sure if anyone mentioned it yet, but you don't need the apostrophe in words as eyes (so not eye's, which would mean eye is).

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Review #2, by Dreammmm Chapter 1. First Year, Introductions, Sorting and the BEST HOUSE AT HOGWARTS!!!

28th September 2013:
I'm so excited about this story! It sounds so good. I think you did pretty good for your first fanfic! please update soon!!!

Author's Response: I'm so happy you are enjoying the story. I've just added the next chapter but it's waiting for validation so it should be up soon. Keep an eye out for it and Thank You! You were my first ever review! :)

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