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Review #1, by Hufflepuff_Pie The Date

6th October 2013:
I'm really enjoying this story, i do feel kinda sad for Ron though being left on his own, i wonder how he'll find out!

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Review #2, by auror_snape The Date

2nd October 2013:
Oh well, too bad for Ron. I hope he doesn't try to take Hermione from Harry.

Author's Response: Hi auror snape

Thank you for spending a minute to review my story. Keep looking for more chapters. If you like this story, feel free to read my other ones.

- Blazing Golden Pheonix.


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Review #3, by Hufflepuff_Pie 1. The Story Begins

24th September 2013:
Hey, this is really good so far i hope you continue, i love harry/hermione pairing! One little bit of constructive criticism, however, is maybe don't use honey and sweetie as much, it makes in sound a little unrealistic. Maybe use "hun" or even just their names or Mione as it sounds cute but not too full on :) good job though defiantly adding to favourites!

Author's Response: Hi Hufflepuff Pie,

Thank you for reading my story. I'll definitely take your advice about the words 'Honey' and 'Sweetie'. I will try to reduce them as much as possible.

- Blazing Golden Pheonix.


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