Reading Reviews for Where's the Romance? Year 1
  
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Review #1, by nininora Halloween Night. Part Two. Year 1: Chapter 6

15th October 2014:
Wow, this is a great story! You should really write some more-I want to know what happens with Harry and Kathleen :)

As a pointer though, I think you should do a spell check before posting, and maybe you can say what Kathleen looks like? All we know is that she has long hair, and it's easier for the reader to picture the story if they know what the characters look like :)

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Review #2, by WickedBertieBotts Love at First Sight. Year 1

23rd September 2013:
Very fast paced. Good for people who lose interest in slow stories! Great job, TheStag!

Author's Response: What do you mean? How is it fast paced?

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