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6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Talia Potter  Meeting a Whole Bunch

31st July 2014:
I really liked it! Hope you update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks a million times!

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Review #2, by Emily Potter Meeting a Whole Bunch

26th May 2014:

"Uh, well, you see, I was," I began. Should I tell her, or should I lie? It wouldn't be a crime... Would it?
"Well, it was kinda stupid. One day I was in an elevator - they're the things english muggles call lifts - and I was really annoyed with my little brother so I punched him. His nail caught my hand and, well, it cut me."
NEWSFLASH: Surprise, surprise! She didn't believe me.
"Maura. Tell me this straight. My friend Harry - yes Harry Potter - has an IDENTICAL curse scar on his forehead where a killing spell rebounded. It was the works of He Who Must Not Be Named. Just nod or shake: did this happen?"
As a great, fat tear dribbled down my worn face, my head slowly but surely nodded a 'yes'. Expecting Hermione to leave it at that was foolish; she wanted to chat it out. She meant well, but I'm not that sort of person. A hug was very nice and I greatly appreciated this mark of our friendship, but I couldn't ignore the 'jokes' she made about The Girl Who Lived. I know she was just trying to ease the pain that permanently stung in my heart, but it was all true. Harry and I (or as Hermione said 'Haura, the team of Voldy killers') would have to kill Voldemort.
Hermione - or as she allowed me to call her now, Mione - was all very sympathetic. She swore down on Harry's life that she hadn't told anyone, but I couldn't help but notice that Parvati and Padma Patil had pointed me out and said "Yep, that's her. TGWL. Hah! We don't have a look in at Harry now!"
All of the chat about Harry Potter caused my bond with him to deepen until one night when I thought to myself: I haven't said hi to Harry, let alone tell him why I am (a) his perfect girlfriend, (b) have an identical scar or (c) I would join him in killing Voldemort. SIGH. This would have to happen soon.

Author's Response: Hey! That's a really good intro! To tell you the truth, I have been stuck on it for a long time. Is it okay if I use it? Of course, I'll write your name. Thanks for reading!

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Review #3, by lamya Loss

4th January 2014:
love it continue plz

Author's Response: Thx so much !

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Review #4, by td Intro- Part 2

9th November 2013:
Write more please...fast!!

Author's Response: Thx for your enthusiasm!! I am currently writing the next chapter and I hope I can post it soon!!!

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Review #5, by Ginbun Intro- Part 2

8th November 2013:
Really good story, looking forward to the next chapter

Author's Response: thx, for ur support!!!

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Review #6, by Ms Longbottom Intro- Part 2

5th November 2013:
Whoa! What just happened here? I just started reading, and then BOOM she battles death eaters! A little fast, but for sure cool! I must admit, I've been looking out for a harry/oc fic. Hurry with that update, please! : ) Can't wait! ~Ms Longbottom~

Author's Response: Thx for ur enthusiasm! I know i have been a little fast, but i wanted the summary to be short so I could get on with the story. I'll probably add another event somewhere, but I have to get an idea!! thx for sticking with me!!!

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