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Review #1, by Ginnys_Real_Twin Prologue

27th March 2014:
Quickly! Write more!
one picky little problem, though. its really picky but actually ginny is really popular, as said several times in the book, so i would change it so instead of saying "Ginny and Lux had never been close, seeing as Lux was popular and always surrounded by hordes of friends." it should say something about them hanging out with different bunches of friends, like ginny with hermione and luna and lux with other girls (maybe lavender or pavarti?).
just a suggestion; again, its a really picky thing but ginny is who i would be if i was in harry potter and my pet hate is when someone gets something wrong about ginny. Thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you! And I'll go and fix that soon! (I'm currently on spring break and my friend's beach house has no wifi! :( haha) But I will definitely post soon I've just been procrastinating and working on other original stuff! I have been missing HPFF though so hopefully the next chapter will be posted soon. It's written I just have to edit it and all! Thank you again for your review!

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Review #2, by magnifique11 Prologue

1st December 2013:
Since you left such a lovely compliment on my Seamus/OC fic, I would check out yours! :) I really like it so far, you've got an interesting premise and I'm excited to see where you go with it. :D Can't wait for the next chapter! (:

Author's Response: Thank you! And I just adore your story so it means a lot! I'll have the next chapter up soon! I've just got to edit it and then put in the queue! Thank you again so much! :)

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Review #3, by DracosGirl012 Prologue

10th October 2013:
hmm... interested in seeing what happens. I rather enjoy Seamus. It's too bad they consider him a "minor character". Anyway, good job and update soon!
Love, DracosGirl012.

Author's Response: Thank youuu! :)

I love Seamus too! He always was one of my favorite characters!

I'll be posting soon, so watch out for it! :)

-Sincerely, Ireland :)

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Review #4, by Rumpelstiltskin Prologue

9th October 2013:

This definitely has the potential to be good :).

I adore minor characters and find it refreshing to stumble across a Seamus/OC fic.

At any rate, I'll be waiting for more!


Author's Response: Ahhh! Thank you so much!

I absolutely love minor characters as well and there is not enough Seamus around I think aha! :)

And I'm about to post the next chapter soon! So look out for it!

-Sincerely, Ireland :)

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