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Review #1, by AlexFan Prologue

27th September 2014:
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I would've reviewed your other story A Little Bit of Luck but I'm a bit short on time at the moment so I went with this instead. I liked how you set up Lux's family at the beginning of the story by showing them fretting over her. Right away I knew that this was set during Deathly Hallows because of the tone. Parents fuss over their children when they send them off to school but not in the same way that Lux's parents do.

I personally always thought that Ginny was a rather popular girl, she had friends across all three houses and she got along well with just about everyone that wasn't a Slytherin. But I guess if Lux had even more friends and knew even more people then it would seem like Ginny kept to herself.

I liked how even in a time of darkness, Seamus still manages to keep the tone light and friendly, the last thing you'd expect someone to do is talk about Quidditch with Voldemort on the loose.

Anyway, I think you've got a good start to the story so far and I hope you continue it!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you didn't review ALBL, because it's under mass revision and it's totally embarrassing! Ha ha!

Thank you for reviewing! I'm so glad that you liked it! Lux's family is very by the rules and so I wanted to really exemplify that, because she's a bit rebellious later in the story and it's cool to see her grow and mature like that!

Ginny was popular, but she and Lux had nothing in common. Lux was the girl who was nice to everyone and had no enemies except for the people who envied her. Ginny was not one to sugarcoat things and so Lux naturally shied away from that sort of honesty. Ginny and Lux were both popular just one two different sides of the spectrum if you know what I mean?

Seamus has always been one of my favorite minor characters. He always seems to be a bit of comic relief like Neville was a couple of times. He's also very driven which I admire.

Well thank you again for your review! I can't say that I'll be posting anytime soon, because like I said ALBL is under mass revision and is currently occupying all of my attention!

Thank you again though! :)


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Review #2, by Ginnys_Real_Twin Prologue

27th March 2014:
Quickly! Write more!
one picky little problem, though. its really picky but actually ginny is really popular, as said several times in the book, so i would change it so instead of saying "Ginny and Lux had never been close, seeing as Lux was popular and always surrounded by hordes of friends." it should say something about them hanging out with different bunches of friends, like ginny with hermione and luna and lux with other girls (maybe lavender or pavarti?).
just a suggestion; again, its a really picky thing but ginny is who i would be if i was in harry potter and my pet hate is when someone gets something wrong about ginny. Thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you! And I'll go and fix that soon! (I'm currently on spring break and my friend's beach house has no wifi! :( haha) But I will definitely post soon I've just been procrastinating and working on other original stuff! I have been missing HPFF though so hopefully the next chapter will be posted soon. It's written I just have to edit it and all! Thank you again for your review!

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Review #3, by magnifique11 Prologue

1st December 2013:
Since you left such a lovely compliment on my Seamus/OC fic, I would check out yours! :) I really like it so far, you've got an interesting premise and I'm excited to see where you go with it. :D Can't wait for the next chapter! (:

Author's Response: Thank you! And I just adore your story so it means a lot! I'll have the next chapter up soon! I've just got to edit it and then put in the queue! Thank you again so much! :)

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Review #4, by DracosGirl012 Prologue

10th October 2013:
hmm... interested in seeing what happens. I rather enjoy Seamus. It's too bad they consider him a "minor character". Anyway, good job and update soon!
Love, DracosGirl012.

Author's Response: Thank youuu! :)

I love Seamus too! He always was one of my favorite characters!

I'll be posting soon, so watch out for it! :)

-Sincerely, Ireland :)


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Review #5, by Rumpelstiltskin Prologue

9th October 2013:
Interesting.

This definitely has the potential to be good :).

I adore minor characters and find it refreshing to stumble across a Seamus/OC fic.

At any rate, I'll be waiting for more!

-Rumpel

Author's Response: Ahhh! Thank you so much!

I absolutely love minor characters as well and there is not enough Seamus around I think aha! :)

And I'm about to post the next chapter soon! So look out for it!

-Sincerely, Ireland :)


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