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Review #1, by dtinch Complications

2nd October 2013:
review 2 for you please write more this story is too interesting to let it fall into abandon category thanks .

Author's Response: Well Thank you, at the moment I have kind of hit a stale point so I am trying to get rid of that and then I will be back to writing Kyle. Thanks again for your review.

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Review #2, by Leonore Prolouge

16th September 2013:
Sounds like this should be interesting - I'll be back, so keep writing. You have got a few spelling and grammar mistakes, which is perfectly understandable. I would recommend reading everything through carefully before posting - word by word, not just skimming - possibly out loud to yourself. That should help you catch most of them. BTW, the title of this chapter should be spelled "prologue" - probably just a typo.

Otherwise, it's good, especially as this is your first story. Keep it coming!

Leonore

Author's Response: Woo my first review.. Well first up thanks for your kind words.. I saw the typo just before I read the review haha.. But anyways thanks for the constructive criticism

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