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Reading Reviews for a radiance denied
  
3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by patronus_charm (one)

12th July 2014:
Hi!

Woah, I donít even have words for this amazingness as Iím just so speechless right now as it was just so, so, so good! ♥ Seriously, you gave Cho levels of depth and complexity that I never knew could be achieved. It really felt as if I could understand why she was a Claw with the quirkiness to look out of the box and realise what life always was.

Even though I felt as if I should be sad as Choís life wasnít great, her one true love had died, her grandmother had died, she had no money, I felt oddly happy and at peace with her and the story because she had realised the true essence of life with this line ĎThere is no radiance, Cedric. It doesn't get better.í And even though that screams angst and what the horror of life was, she addressed that line to Cedric, almost as if that was a form of acceptance on what life was like and that was a really clever move.

Gah, I just loved this so much as it was just so amazing and your language was beautiful! ♥

-Kiana
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Author's Response: omg such a lovely review that i feel deeply undeserving of ;___; thank you so much!

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Review #2, by ILuvSev4Evr7 (one)

3rd December 2013:
Wow, I really liked your style of writing! Nice job :)

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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Review #3, by MissesWeasley123 (one)

3rd November 2013:
Just... just wow.

You write, beautifully. It's so breathtakingly beautiful how you write. I loved this piece so much.

As an author, I would always find it hard to write Cho, mainly because she would be so painfully difficult to set my mind upon. I never really liked her, but now you've taken annoying Cho Chang, and given her so much depth and beauty.

And asdfghjkl; I saw on your AP, that you're Contour. Like, the Contour. Your graphics are beauties, and apparently your writing is too.

The use of the word radiant was so smart and just so impactful. Cedric's inclusion was brilliant, and you showed their relationship so well. In those moments I felt so bad that he died. With this piece you evoked so many emotions and you're amazing.

Keep the great work up!

- Nadia

Author's Response: Holy crumbly crumpets, I have done nothing to deserve this praise ;A; I actually feel bad for putting up such a shoddy piece of writing now that you've said all these things lol I MUST STRIVE TO BE WORTHY. I'm not a big canon Cho fan either, to be honest. But I really wanted to take a generally disliked character and put myself in their shoes and see if I'd be able to romanticize the situation into a chapter of pity >.> But gah I was not expecting such a lovely review! Thank you so much Nadia, and also for the kind but slightly unbelievable praise for my graphics :')

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