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Review #1, by ZenaShaw2101 .I.

18th October 2013:
its really good!im a bit confused though was there a time gap? did she listen to what that girl said? please don't take me not knowing as bad its brill and I would love more!

-Zena x

Author's Response: Zena! You are too good to me!

There was a time gap! Unfortuantley I had to post it from my phone so it didn't come out italizied like it was suppose to. In the begging she is dreaming about her third year at Hogwarts and then she wakes up to find Teddy.

Unfortunatley she did listen to her bully, as some people aren't strong enough to stand up for themselves or others! I will update both stories either this month or next month! Thank you for your lovely review!


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