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Review #1, by TheEmotionalTeaspoon Distraction

24th April 2016:
Oh my gosh I LOVED this! What a hilarious, fun, and awesome read. You got straight to the good parts with a brilliant OC, a really fun concept, and a great characterization of Sirius. It made me sad that those final few lines suggested they didn't end up together, because you wrote them so beautifully! I think they would have made a great on/off sort of couple, since they're both so playful and clearly have amazing chemistry. ...In other words, please write a sequel, haha!

I was grinning like an idiot the whole time I read this, I'm not gonna lie. Great work!

-Kate :) x

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Review #2, by Mystery Pnix Distraction

19th December 2013:
raunchy, sassy, sexy and hot

Author's Response: All good things in my book! haha glad you liked it

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Review #3, by a-me Distraction

22nd October 2013:
this story would be a full on 10/10 if you would expand it at least into a short story. i want to read what happens next :D

Author's Response: I've actually never even thought about expanding it, but hey maybe I will if I get to a spot in my other stories that i need a bit of a breather. Thanks for the review. I'm super happy you liked it and I'll definitely give it some thought!

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Review #4, by Rumpelstiltskin Distraction

9th October 2013:
This is beautiful.

As I was reading it, I kept asking myself "Why are there no reviews on this?!", so allow me to be your first.

Not only did this story make me laugh so hard I nearly cried, it brought on some very strong emotions. It's sometimes hard to find a story to connect with that can evoke emotions quite like this. That's one of the things that I especially like about this.

I especially enjoyed the end. This is a prime example of an M-rated love scene. The fine line and vague regulations surrounding them can hinder writer's abilities to create love scenes. But you! You've captured it!

Lacey's character is well-developed as well. That's something that really strikes me because I love a good OC to mix things up a bit!

Overall, I am genuinely impressed!


Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for all the wonderful compliments! It's good to hear that you laughed because that really was the whole point. I tried to be real careful with the love scene as well, and its nice to hear my care paid off. It means a lot so thank you for taking the time to review!

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