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Review #1, by milominderbinder Another Prank

2nd December 2013:
Hiya! I thought this was a great first story, well done!

You established Lily's character really quickly by showing her priorities of studying, which meant that she was really easy to connect with and I enjoyed reading your interpretation of her.

I think you wrote James as a meaner version than a lot of people do, but I really enjoyed it. People often try to romanticise his character but the fact is that he was a bully, which you highlighted really well here.

I totally understand why Lily blew up at him! She had clearly been pushed to her breaking point, again you showed that really well and I was seething right along with her.

Well done, i really enjoyed this :)

~Maia

Author's Response: Aw, you are too nice. Thanks, I might make another one since I have a few days off.

Once again, thank you for reading my fan fiction and going through the trouble of writing a constructive review :).

-Monal Garg


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