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Review #1, by Iellwen One Wish

9th January 2014:
Europe IS rather big, you know?
So I don't think waking up on some beach would definitely prove she's left it.
Maybe add a significant landmark or name or sth?

I'm looking forward to '45 but isn't Malfoy behaving out of character like... A LOT?!
I mean wishing upon a star, okay, I can take for the progression of the story.
But the crying and laughing and buying ice cream...
I feel like tutting but I'm curious to
read about how they get out of there...

It's interesting that you took out the "Draco & Hermione befriend each other" part of a Dramione and make them immediately and randomly hit it off since they've time-traveled.

Since this chapter is so short and (as you wrote) is a filling one, you should update soon and add the next chapter!


Author's Response: Thank you! I really needed some help touching up this story, and your review has definitely given me a few ideas on how to fix this story.

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