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Review #1, by LadyL8 I Think I Love you.... One-Shot

23rd September 2013:
Hi there, Jayde. I've finally found time to read your story.

Firstly, I just want to say this is a really good first story. You've captured the emotions well, and I really ended up feeling sorry for for Cedric.

I also liked the plot. I LOVE stories with minor characters, so I'm so glad you decided to write a story with Oliver and Cedric. I guess my only comment would be that it developed a bit too quickly, but I know you wrote a few years ago and it is, after all, your very first story. And keeping in that mind, it's actually really well written. I'm actually shocked that this is your first story. Trust me, it's ten times better than my first story was.

I really liked it. And I can't wait to read your next story (the one you're planning). Keep up the good work! :D

- Lotte

Author's Response: Hey Lotte,

I'm really glad you enjoyed the story! I love writing minor characters as you can play with them a bit more :)

I'll keep that in mind, to slow down the process of development especially when writing a one shot!

Aww thank you :)

Thanks for reviewing

Jayde :) xx


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Review #2, by HeyMrsPotter I Think I Love you.... One-Shot

9th September 2013:
Jayde! First off congratulations on your first story! I love that you chose to write it about minor characters :) The description was really good in this and I think you conveyed Paige's emotions really well. I felt so sorry for Cedric in this but I guess that means you wrote his anger and sadness well.

Well done!

Author's Response: Hey Dee! Aww thanks but it's a far too of nice review for a not so good story! I'm glad you think I wrote Cedric's and Paige's emotions well as I didn't think I wrote it that well :) also I felt really bad writing this as I love Cedric so I wrote the story that will be up hopefully soon. When my computer decides to work!! :( Thank you :) x

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