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Review #1, by rimzy Introductions

16th September 2013:
Heya told ya I'd read the story. It's rimmy here n I luved it. I generally love the idea. Speaking to the dead. How weird kinda like my dream too. Lolz.

Author's Response: Lol! I'm glad you liked it :). And it was a freaky dream i must say ;)

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Review #2, by harrietm Chapter 3

15th September 2013:
Oooo this is a pretty interesting start to a story, love the concept, I'm intrigued! You've done pretty good job introducing everyone, and I like the banter. Is it too early to ship April and Al? If it is I don't care haha ;)
I think you just need to go back through and edit cos there's quite a few spelling mistakes here and there, such as shell instead of she'll. Also some of the dialogue could maybe benefit from some punctuation checks.
But overall good job, and I'll be looking out for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :)
About the grammar and punctuation, I'm aware of that and I was thinking of editing it but school just started and its been busy, but then again they're just excuses ;).
And as for the April and Al shipping I'll just say... maybe... maybe not ;p
thanks again for reviewing! It's made my day. :D


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