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Reading Reviews for A State of Affair
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Review #1, by Harry and Ginny Chapter One

20th August 2013:
great start on this fic! it seems very interesting and I can't wait to read the next chapter! btw I noticed a few spelling mistakes:
1. So you arevery eagar... ? - So are you very eager... ?
2. required ciriculum - required curriculum
3. actually happeneing - actually happening
4. everything arranged we we're just waiting - everything arranged and we were just waiting...
5. He was arogant - He was arrogant

I hope you didn't mind me mentioning what the spelling mistakes were since I'm only trying to help! can't wait to read next chapter!^_^


Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: oh no i don't mind at all! anything that is helping to make the story better is welcome! I'm very glad you like the story and the next chapter is in the queue so it should be up anytime! and thank you for the corrections honestly its a big help!

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