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Review #1, by HeyMrsPotter Asteriscus Maritimus

2nd September 2013:
Hello! I'm here with the first of your prize reviews. I couldn't resist reading this one, as I'm entered in the challange and I just LOVE Luna.

I think your characterisation of her in this is absolutely perfect. Not only have you captured her personality, her voice and her mannerisms, you've also managed to do it in a perfect 13 year old way. I'm incredibly envious!

Her dad is perfect too, excitable and completely insane and I really liked that you had a hint in here of the side we saw in Deathly Hallows, fiercly protective of things that he loves in an almost scary way.

I love the OC you created in this, he's every bit as fascinating as Luna. The way that they met was really funny and their little adventure was excellent. I love that she found someone who believed in the same things as her. His dog sounds adorable in an ugly dog kind of way ;)

Just like in The Forging of the Ways your attention to the little details is astounding. The description is beautiful and the little touches of Portugese really added to the exotic feel.

I have no doubt in my mind that you will do brilliantly in the challenge!

Author's Response: Thank you thank you!! I had such fun writing this, and I'm sure you had fun writing yours too - Luna is one crazy character! Best of luck in the challenge! Xo

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