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Review #1, by theblacksisters A Chapter of Misery

29th September 2013:
Very good gone bad. I like it-definitely a 'chapter of mistery'

Author's Response: Thank you! The objective was to make a 'Good Gone Bad' story, as shown by the challenge I was completing.
Cheers, Phoenix Quill :D


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Review #2, by blackballet A Chapter of Misery

11th August 2013:
Hello there! This is blackballet with your review from my challenge.

I really love this story! I think it's a great idea, and I love what you did with it. I think it could be a bit more embellished. It's a bit short, and I wasn't too aware of what Ginny was thinking. I could definitely see it turning into a short story or novella if you wanted to. I think it's got great promise, and I feel like if any character would do this, it would be Ginny.

Very nice job, and keep an eye out for the results!

Author's Response: Hi there!
Thank you! When I got Ginny in the comp, I automatically thought, 'what's the one thing Ginny would do anything for?' The answer was obvious - Harry. So I wrote it like that.
Yes, it is a bit lacking with details. It probably won't turn into a short story/novella (seeing as the main character is dead already).
Cheers, Phoenix Quill :D


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