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Review #1, by SereneChaos 18 September, 1976

9th January 2014:
Agh, that's so sweet! I like that you don't have Remus and Emmy together as a couple just yet--it's more fun to see them with other people and watch the relationship build up, and haha, I like Kerry. :P Good job with this story!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed it. :) I'm hoping to update within the next couple of weeks if my muse allows it, lol.

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Review #2, by WumpsQuill 22 October, 1975

1st September 2013:
Love this story :) can't wait for the next chapter!

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Review #3, by IlUvPuRpLeandHaRrYPoTtEr0702 27 April, 1975

30th August 2013:
Why did you put a big gap between stories. One story is on Christmas 1973 then you just jump to April 1975. You should try to keep the dates only weeks or months apart. 2 years is too long.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review.

As the summary of the story describes, this is a series of moments and aren't like chapters in a novel. Not all moments are perfectly timed, and if I wrote perfectly timed chapters just for the sake of consistency, they would become pointless fillers that would bore both the reader and myself. Furthermore, while this is a short story collection, all of the short stories do have a common theme: they're the moments Remus wanted Emmeline to stay. They happen more frequently as they mature, develop an even deeper friendship, and begin dealing with more grown-up situations, but they're still a bit young now. That's why I skipped their first two years at Hogwarts; they were friends, but nothing out of the ordinary happened - at least not in my head canon.

I hope this answers your question! :)

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Review #4, by grace 27 April, 1975

30th August 2013:
I like it don't keep me waiting 2 long 4 the next chapter

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Review #5, by grace 20 December, 1973

30th August 2013:
I think I'm gonna like this story a lot ill try and reveiw on every chapter and I will make it 1 of my favoirites (sorry I can't spell)

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Review #6, by LoopyMoony 27 April, 1975

19th August 2013:
Oh sweet! I love your Emmeline, she seems lovely with a fiesty streak! I really am liking this story. It's nice to have Remus having someone at school like James had Lily. Laughed at the thought of the other Marauders sleeping in the Hospital Wing with Remus. Lovely thought! It's also interesting to see the age difference since last chapter and how they are getting more comfortable and over that awkward stage! Hope to read more!

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Review #7, by dust decay 20 December, 1973

9th August 2013:
Ooh, I love this! Remus is such a beautiful character and deserves some love. :-) Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I do hope you continue to enjoy! :)

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