Reading Reviews for In the Arms of a Death-Eater
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Review #1, by Greeneyedkitten The Last Stand

14th April 2015:
If you never thought they could have a life together you shouldn't have built it up to the thought that it could which frankly you did. The abrupt ending is disappointing and useless.

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Review #2, by dailyprophet The Last Stand

1st March 2015:
I tip my hat off to you for being one of the first stories that does not have the usual "happy ending" for Draco/Hermione or any character for that matter.
I have to say, I was a bit saddened on just "Hermione's dead, now Draco, BOOM. story's over", but I can't see what else could have been added, so I can deal. HAHA!
Truly a wonderful read.

Author's Response: Thank you SO MUCH for understanding! I know it ended really suddenly, and believe it or not, I'm (still) working on an appropriate epilogue for the story :D

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Review #3, by buttercupp88 The Last Stand

10th February 2015:
thats it... little disappointed...

Author's Response: Sorry you felt disappointed :(

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Review #4, by jenny The Last Stand

5th November 2014:
Well this is just stupid! I rarely leave any comments on the stories, but now I just had to! This is such a great story, and I stayed awake till 3 am till I finished it, but couldn't be more dissapointed when I did. Why would you do that? Why kill them both, now that they finally could be together? I don't get it... this would be one of the top stories I've ever read, if you didn't kill them... I really think you didn't need to, and not just because I didn't want them dead.
Sorry for any spelling errors, english isn't my first language... keep writing...

Author's Response: Your comment leaves me a bit twisted with emotion. I'm so glad you liked the majority of it, but I do feel strongly that Draco and Hermione would never be able to live a happy life together after everything they had been through previously and I felt the poetic-ness of their deaths was appropriate.

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Review #5, by Forever_More The Last Stand

27th October 2014:
So many emotions! But I love this story, very well written.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!

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Review #6, by Forever_More Revelation

26th October 2014:
Amazing story so far, and story telling! It's definitely different then anything else i've read. Dramione is one of my favorite ships so its always nice to find a well written story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!

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Review #7, by LexiBlack The Last Stand

26th September 2014:
I can't even begin to describe how much I enjoyed this one.

I've been reading these for a decade now and this one, has been one of the best I've ever read. Such a great plot, great writing style, and everything just worked. The ending though, oh, so perfect.

Truly an amazing job.

Author's Response: thank you so much for your amazing compliments! i can't believe you felt my story was the best you've read in a decade :') I am seriously tearing up with pride at your words and I don't think I could thank you enough for this review. Thanks for reading!

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Review #8, by LizMalfoy The Last Stand

24th July 2014:
I am unable to post a proper review due to the fact that I'm crying after reading the ending so all I have to say is you did a wonderful job. Keep writing.

Author's Response: I hope to be 'picking up the pen' so to say again soon. Be on the lookout! Thanks for reading.

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Review #9, by Crookshanks11 The Last Stand

20th June 2014:
This story was very well done and I applaud you for it. The ending did bug me however. Out of the whole story it had the least umph and believability. Death doesnt suit these incredibly strong characters very well. Other than that, bravo.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for the constructive comments. I thought about changing the ending over and over, but the 'happily ever after' certainly doesn't feel right to me, as the writer. Their back story was simply to filled with hatred, to much 'bad blood', etc. Thank you so much for enjoying other areas of the story :)

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Review #10, by Anon The Last Stand

2nd June 2014:
Seriously what kind if ending is that?!? Really great story, loved how it was more believable than most, but seriously!! That ending was just not good. Too sudden. If they're gonna have to die please at least lengthen it out, lead up to it! Don't just slam it down on us. But aside from the ending it was good.

Author's Response: too sudden? This story is over 50,000 words long, 20 chapters... sorry that it took you by such surprise?

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Review #11, by prefectperfect The Last Stand

22nd March 2014:
I can't believe it's finished! I love it a great end to a really good story! Though a sad one! I loved it, can't wait to read some more stories from you :) xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much for enjoying this story. It was a pleasure writing it, and while life has given me quite the busy schedule lately, i do think I will 'pick up the pen' so to speak again soon. Thanks again!

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Review #12, by Kylie The Last Stand

4th March 2014:
That ending! Argghhh!
Loved it all but arghh why you do this?!

Author's Response: This story is a bit of a interpretation of my own life. I didn't originally plan for the unhappy ending, but going through a divorce will change how you feel about what you are creating. Not to mention, these two would never truly be free to live happily ever after. There was to much back story created by the lovely J.K. for any Dramione to end on a happy note, in my humble opinion :)

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Review #13, by Ju Hana Dinner and a Drink

27th February 2014:
Hmmm...starting chapter 3 until 5..i found it kinda slow and out of pace a was higly interesting to read the 1st & 2nd chapter but afterwards, it bores me out..the story has started to change it pace..hopefully the remaining chapters can be a bit more exciting.

Author's Response: It certainly does get more exciting, and I hope you have continued to read it! I can promise, it definitely picks up the pace. Thanks for reading!

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Review #14, by Ju Hana A Meeting of Unlike Minds

25th February 2014:
1st of all..I would like to say that you have a very good and a very strong excellent impression from the 1st chapter..

secondly you have a great script on this 2nd chapter as I even read it out loud just to listen on how it sounds, also by mimicking hermione's & draco's accent and

This story is super intriguing and hopefully will continue to amaze me till the end..

continuing reading

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you are enjoying it thus far!

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Review #15, by valerie The Last Stand

12th February 2014:
gah! you killed them off?! you made me love them then killed them! i was starting to picture their lives together, i.. well obviously you did a good job, a crappy story doesn't break hearts... i will maintain though draco as you write him is great but a very different man than the boy in the books which can be seen as feasible.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying my story was great! I really loved writing this, and the poetic tragic ending seemed so much more fitting for their lives then the romantic happily ever after. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading!

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Review #16, by SuperiorLyrebird The Last Stand

27th January 2014:
And then I read the last sentence and cried. Wonderful.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! I loved writing this story, and I'm so happy that you loved reading it and think it was wonderful :)

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Review #17, by Winnie The Last Stand

21st December 2013:
How can you do this to me? All this time, I thought everything was going to be okay!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I hope you still enjoyed the story, and can see the poetry in ending it the way I did. I truly enjoyed writing this, and reading your reviews made me smile :) Thanks again!

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Review #18, by Winnie Rescued

21st December 2013:
I love how Hermione has found her true love and starting to make amends with Ron.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I liked the idea of them being on decent terms after Hermione got over the deception.

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Review #19, by Winnie Captured

21st December 2013:
Draco will be okay, right?

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! All will be revealed...

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Review #20, by Winnie Encounters

21st December 2013:
Hermione should trust Draco more. I know it's probably really hard, since he was a Death Eater.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Hermione wants to trust him, but her new feelings of him are in a constant battle with the person she once knew, so it's a difficult position for her.

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Review #21, by Winnie Revelation

20th December 2013:
I didn't enjoy that fight, because I love Draco too much. As for Ron, I guess he deserved it, just leaving Hermione without confiding in her. I'm glad that Draco decided to tell Harry about his feelings for Hermione. If he didn't, Harry probably wouldn't have taken so coolly. I want more Hermione and Draco actions.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

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Review #22, by Winnie Working Amongst Them

20th December 2013:
Now that Ron's out of the picture (I think he is.), the problem's just Narcissa.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! More about Narcissa will come into play later.

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Review #23, by Winnie Asked and Answered

20th December 2013:
Oh my! I hope nothing bad happens.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

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Review #24, by Winnie A Startling Surprise

20th December 2013:
Oh my Rowling! Ron just shows up out of nowhere. Draco is fantasizing about Hermione. Narcissa is in the way of them ever becoming friends. I hope that everything will turn out okay.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Everything will be revealed :)

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Review #25, by Winnie Dinner and a Drink

20th December 2013:
Woah. . . He's just going to walk into her house and leave. . .

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

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