Reading Reviews for Crazy Beautiful Life
  
6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by oldershouldknowbetter Who needs talking?

22nd February 2014:
Ahhh, miscommunication and pride - the reciprocating engine which drives any good romance.

I find myself smiling all the way through each of your chapters.

When I first saw Bob, in the chapter heading, I though 'oh no, not another love interest for Rose' but no it was her internal monologue given form. I've seen that device used before and used poorly. Luckily you tread the fine line between believability and clinical insanity - by leavening it with a bit of humour you make it work.

A bit of constructive criticism, if I may be so bold:
'Per se' is pronounced 'per say' but it is written 'per se' - it comes from/is a Latin phrase.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to review multiple chapters! Yes, you gotten love pride. Just messes up everything now doesn't it? I really appreciate your feedback, the helpful bit at the end as well! Spelling and I aren't the best of friends, so thank you! Please continue to read and enjoy!!

 Report Review

Review #2, by oldershouldknowbetter When Rose Met Bob

22nd February 2014:
So cool Rosie, so cool.

At first going to blab that it's Malfoy, then he comes along and it gets awkward; then up jumps Bob and it gets even more awkward; then Bob takes the heat, to the relief of both parties; finally, after Malfoy almost runs away in terror, Rose's verbal diarrhea blurts out a secret she's been keeping, even from herself.

Super smooth, Rose Weasley.

Author's Response: Well she is a Weasley, and we know how smooth they all are :)At least she thinks she can blame it all on Bob! For now.. Thank you again for your review!

 Report Review

Review #3, by oldershouldknowbetter Prologue

22nd February 2014:
I always like these beginnings, to see an author's take on the characters - this person's going to be the fun one, this other one's going to be studious, etc.

So we have a Rose, not super-smart, normal; almost on the outside looking in; hates (maybe too strong, dislikes, can't stand?) Scorpius but found herself having kissed him .
OK, it's a good position to start from, I like it, now on with the story.

Author's Response: Thank you! You pretty much nailed Rose on the head- normal for the most, at least taking her family into consideration. But not to worry, Rosie will have her fair share of problems. Thanks again for the review!

 Report Review

Review #4, by ruthdobble When Rose Met Bob

26th November 2013:
I love this idea of Bob! This chapter made me laugh, it's really good and I hope you continue it :) Not the chapter, the story, I mean :)
I'm a first time story writer so if you want to check out my story go ahead :) I really do like it :)

-ruthdobble

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Bob is just a crazy little guy, poor Rose isn't going to be getting rid of him anytime soon! I really appreciate your feedback! And I would love to check out your story!

 Report Review

Review #5, by babydoll When Rose Met Bob

23rd November 2013:
I love the story! Dom is great and Rose as well. Keep it up! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback! I am on break for holiday, so hopefully I can get another chapter up soon!

 Report Review

Review #6, by mini mis Prologue

19th August 2013:
GREAT!:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate your review!!

 Report Review
If this is your story and you wish to respond to reviews, please login