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Review #1, by Unicorn_Charm Heartbeat

14th December 2014:
Hi there!

Wow that was so fast paced, but so amazing! It just felt like a whirlwind of a night. From dancing, drinking, partying and then heading back for a one night stand. A pretty accurate representation of a wild night out. You really do seem to remember it in little clips and snippets like that.

I loved how you wrote this! The short sentences made the whole thing really intense. I'm honestly really intrigued by this first chapter and definitely want to keep reading and see either what lead to this, or where everything goes from here. From what we see, it seems that Dominique is a bit of a wild child haha.

I loved this first chapter! Excellent job! I'll absolutely be back to continue on with this!

xoxo Meg

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Review #2, by jailbird Heartbeat

24th January 2014:
This is.. sad. In a good way? It's interesting. Can't wait to see what you do with it. I think it's a good beginning!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely review! (:

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Review #3, by couldyoureallyknow Heartbeat

19th September 2013:
Please add more I like this!!

Author's Response: I'm currently writing the next chapter, so sorry for the delay! Thank you so much!

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Review #4, by 800 words of heaven Heartbeat

17th August 2013:
REVIEW TAG!

This story was lookng rather lonely, so I thought I'd give it a go. I'm not usually a big fan of Dominique, but I was pleasantly surprised!

I love the way you wrote this, with the repetition of words and super short sentences. It gave the chapter a rhythm which was quite fitting for the setting.

Dominique seems like an interesting character, and someone whom I'd definitely like to find out more about. I don't really know what the pllot is yet, but it seems character driven, which is super nice. I like a good character driven plot, haha!

Good luck with chapter two, which I hope to read soon!

Author's Response: Eee I'm so glad you liked it! I wasn't too sure about the whole short sentence thing so I'm glad it worked.

Oh yes, most certainly character driven. I love characters I normally lose sight of any sort of plot anyway.

You're so lovely, thank you for your very kind words!


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Review #5, by Silverashes Heartbeat

9th August 2013:
I lovvveee it! I can't wait to see what else happens! I love Dominique; she's such an underwritten character! Please update soon, lovely!

xxRachel

Author's Response: Ahh thank you! You're always so nice and such a sweetheart, you really brighten my day!

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