Wow, excellent story. It has such a sad ending to it though. I was hoping they would be alright *cry* but you wrote it more realistic. You have a lot of talent and i hope that you continue writing. Well i really enjoyed reading Tiny hands of truth, and i can honestly say that i couldn't stop reading it once i started. Report Review
awww that was soo sad.
i mean it was good.but soo sad.
dried some tears there.
but was amazing.
and kaity was just adorable.
yay! great job! :] Report Review
Hmmm, probably better than I could write although it did jump from subject to subject Report Review
Funny! Report Review
"I would But I'm afraid my head can't go that far up my arse."
haha i saw that comment once on a shirt lol Report Review
How could you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Report Review
Awwww! I'm so sorry! This was a cute chapter! Report Review
Parvati not Parveti! Report Review
Spelling is a little better, but it's Dumbledore not Dumbledor! Report Review
I like the idea, but you need to fix your spellings! You spelled at least 20 words incorrectly. I'm sorry but a good story requires correct spelling Report Review
i read this back when i didn't have a penname (i signed as 'gabby') and now i obviously do, so i'm adding it to my favorites because i love this story soooo much!!!!!!!!!!!! Report Review
I love your story! Report Review
oh my god.....i just finished reading...this story was so good....i can't believe he died.....i nearly started bawling at the note....wow...i'm in shock....this was very good. Report Review
this is a good story so far. the only suggestion i have is that you get a beta, because there are many spelling mistakes. i. e. ceiling was spelled incorrectly, violently, and deja vu.
This plot line seems fab. But The spelling SUCKS! I don't want this to sound malicious, I honestly just want to suggest that you type it up in Microsoft Word. The spell chack could eliminate the worst of the spelling errors. Report Review
I know I'm a freak, but work on the spelling and grammar (homonyms especially) Report Review
Wow! I really wasn't expecting Draco to die. I cried! I almost never cry when I read fanfiction. Report Review
omg i loved it and you made me cry it was sooo sad :(:(:(:(:( Report Review
oh my god your story made me cry you are very talented . this story is lovely and i love every word the letter got to me the worst and i didnt stop crying for an hour after reading it.
you have a good skill in writing and i love this idea i hope you have more storys that i can read maybe some with happier endings . Report Review
the last line of this story was absolutely beautiful! Report Review
omg im seriously sobbing right now. i hate sad endings but this one was so sad it as amazing. that letter in the end broke my heart. *WOW* this was so amazing. you have to write more stories! thank god for you!!! Report Review
lol. i love that joke at the end! hehe. it makes me giggle... good job! Report Review
that was sooooooooo SAD!!!!!!!! BUT REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I AM LIKE CRYING RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!! Report Review
The best fanfic I have ever read... I'm seriously crying right now. It was so sad. I wish that when she saw him lying down in the battlefield he woke up, and every thing was a happily ever after. Will you consider making an altornet (sorry about the spelling) ending? Report Review
Wow what a beautiful story!This went into my faves about a month ago so I would remember to read it and now that I have I am utterly astonished.Just a beautiful story! Amazing job!!! Report Review
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