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Review #1, by ScarletEye158 Midnight Romeo

1st March 2014:
Hey there!

This was a really sweet story :) I really liked the plot and really liked what you did with it; I never thought about the Founders having kids, so the fact that Slytherin and Gryffindor's children fell in love was definitely a surprise for me. I like how they didn't care about blood and all of that nonsense and they were just able to love each other :) You have a really nice way of writing and I was sad to see it come to an end :(

With that being said, I kind of wish it would have been longer. There was so much that went on in this short chapter that I bet you could turn it into a short story or novella to make it even more awesome :) I think you could definitely add a lot of detail and show more about what Rosa and George went through to show how much they loved each other.

I really liked how you portrayed Salazar Slytherin. You stayed very true to his character and as a conon lover, I thought it made the story more believable.

Aww, poor Rosa :( I can't believe her father would do that to her... and I can't believe she was pregnant! I wish she would have told him earlier; maybe they could've ran away together or something and been together forever! That's definitely not how life works though, and I wouldn't expect it to be any different for them, especially with how secretive they had to be.

anyways, I really enjoyed this! Nice job :)

-Amanda

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Review #2, by blackballet Midnight Romeo

6th August 2013:
This is really interesting! I've never read anything remotely close to it. I think it might have been a bit too rushed, and I don't know if Rosaline would've been that kind only because of who brought her up. Other than that, it was great!

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Review #3, by navyfail Midnight Romeo

6th August 2013:
Hi! I am here from the Ravenclaw review battle. This was a nice read. I liked how you described the Willow Tree and how much symbolism it added to the story. George and Rosa were very sweet. I wish George hadn't fled from the manor but it was for his own safety. I did wish to see more of Salazar's harsh personality but what I saw of him I liked.

The end was cute though a tiny bit rushed. I did not expect her to be pregnant though. I love how the end leaves us wondering where Rosa went after that and if she ever saw her family again.

One thing I noticed: "His blood was splattered with blood." This part was confusing since I don't remember seeing Salazar's blood. Should it be 'wand was splattered with blood?'

Great one-shot.
I enjoyed reading it. :)
~Sama

Author's Response: Sorry, WAND splattered with blood, I did rush it, as it took me 74 hours to complete :/
I will go back and re-do, fleshing out this chapter.
I'm glad you liked it,
~ Macy ;P


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