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Review #1, by Freda_and_Georgina Absolutely Excellent

11th July 2014:
Al is in SLITHRIN? That is the last House I put him in mentally. If you don't mind my asking, what traits do you have Albus owning that belong in Slytherin? Also, there are a lot of people at the Burrow. Just thought I had to mention that little elephant in the room. One thing to note, your paragraphs tend to be a bit long, you could try editing them later to be a little bit more broken up. Although there were several names to remember, you made sure to introduce them so the reader wasn't confused. Not a bad story. *insert a thumbs up*
--Georgina
2014 House Cup Review

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Review #2, by LilyLou Absolutely Excellent

13th September 2013:
Hey! LilyLou here for my challenge!

This is a good one shot. You definitely focused well on the family portion of the challenge. Quite a few entries drifted off but yours stayed put. Well done!

Keep writing, and thanks for entering my challenge!

-Janelle

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I'm glad you liked it! I really tried to keep that focus. It was a pleasure to be a part of your challenge... Thanks! :)

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Review #3, by Acceber Absolutely Excellent

27th July 2013:
Not amazing I meant embarrassed! sorry!

Author's Response: Oops, I'll change those right away! Thanks for letting me know. I was writing really late at night so I didn't even realize those mistakes. Thanks for the review!

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Review #4, by Acceber Absolutely Excellent

27th July 2013:
Absolutely loved it! :) I loved James' tone throughout and how fun and fast paced it was. Only two little problems, there's a spelling mistake at the end on amazing and is it right that Alice Longbottom has a boyfriend but Al fancies her anyway? Loved it loved it loved it!

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