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Review #1, by AlexFan Rose

6th August 2013:
The suspense. It's killing me. I want to know what all of this business is about. What exactly did Rose do that everyone hates her for doing? Obviously she told something otherwise her family wouldn't be calling her a snitch. Did she sell her family out to the tabloids? Did she spill the beans about what went on with her family? This is killing me, I must know! How many chapters do I have to read before you I ally tell everyone why Rose is the snitch and everyone hates her. At least Albus doesn't hate her.

The bathtub could be a bomb, if you filled it with water and dropped some Radium in it, it would explode. Professor Bitler really needs to work on his smuggling skills.

Rose and Scorpius seemed to get along for a few minutes here but then everything went back to normal. Really interesting start to a story and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: The reason for the family's hate of Rose will be coming out in small bits and pieces as the story goes on, but it shouldn't be too long before it all comes together (:
That IS true, and then poor Penelope would have exploded ):
I'm glad you like it, I'm writing the next chapter now! :D

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Review #2, by Albus Potter's Woman Rose

30th July 2013:
Pretty good but I don't like the fact that people hate Rose. She's one of my favourite Next-Gen characters :(
Keep writing!
-Albus Potter's Woman

Author's Response: I know, it sucks that everyone hates her ): but if you keep reading, you just might find out why ;) thanks for the review!

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Review #3, by itsonlyjamespotter Rose

29th July 2013:
I really like this- it's a good start! :) I'm really intrested to see what rose & james dynamic was before the blow up so possibly a flash back next chapter? Oh also Scorp seems like an intresting character and i think we are going to be seeing a lot of him in the future. It's also nice to see that scorp gets on well (ish) with the weasley's and potters - have they always and why do they accept him because parents hate each other etc etc - i think there is a good story behind that too. ANYHOW UPLOAD SOON DEARIE. ~ Hannah xx

Author's Response: I'm happy you like it! :) I was definitely planning on going more in depth into Rose's past, especially in regards to her closeness with James and how that all changed. There will most likely be a flashback or two along the way ;)
Scorpius' relationship with the Weasleys in this story is kind of a complicated one; he's never really been close with any of them(especially Rose) and that's why it's so shocking to her that he's in cahoots with James.
I'm working on the next chapter now! :D

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