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Review #1, by 800 words of heaven Leaving the Nest

8th September 2013:

It has been so long since I last visited your page! There's almost too many things to choose from! I decided on this one because just one review made me a little sad.

Hahaha! I'm looking forward to the shenanigans these two will probably get up to. Growing up is hard, and I imagine it will be entertaining to watch with Lucy and Lorcan as our guides.

I feel as if we got a very superficial look at Lucy and Lorcan's personalities in chapter one. Obviously, it's still chapter one, so there's loads of time for character development. More than anything else, I'm looking forward to seeing them develop, grow, and change.

I look forward to seeing Lorcan's reactions to Lucy's erratic behaviours - perhaps as soon as chapter two? *wink wink, nudge nudge* :)

Author's Response: Hey there again!

*sigh* Yes, I know, I've become obsessed with starting stories lately and the beautiful graphics that go with them and I can't stop. I NEED HELP. At the same time though, it's loads of fun but I'm not able to update all of the stories because I'm so busy now.

I agree, growing up is a scary thing and when I think about how I have to face the world when I'm older on my own and make my own way, as exciting as it is, it terrifies me. But yes, prepare yourself for some shenanigans coming your way.

I'm pretty sure things can never go smoothly when you've got a child of Luna Lovegood and a Weasley together.

Who knows, we might see Lorcan's reaction to Lucy's behaviour *hint hint nudge nudge*

Thanks so much for the review!

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Review #2, by patronus_charm Leaving the Nest

2nd August 2013:
Hello there! Calling in for Team Blue!

Can I just say how impressed and almost scared by the sheer amount of novels you have! I've never seen someone Balance so many and so diverse ones at that too! also apologises for too many/lack of capitals it's a European Keyboard.

Having read quite a bit of your work now, I have to say you've developed a really lovely Narration style. It's got the right amount of humour and cynicalism in it and it makes for a very entertaining read.

The spilt Narration between multiple characters worked really well and it created a nice contrast into the minds of all of the characters and I already got a feel for them.

I really loved your bit about Luna. Even if it was only a small part I thought it was wonderful because so many People seem to final to catch all of her quirks but you managed brilliantly.

All in all, I thought it was a really great start to the Story and I can't wait to see where it goes! :D


Author's Response: Hey Kiana!

Hehe, sometimes I'm a little bit scared by how many novels I've started as well and I stop to think how I'll update all of them but then I stop thinking about it. There will be a couple more coming out soon.

Thank you, I'm so happy to hear that my writing has gotten along and that it's better than it used to be. I'm also glad to hear that you found this entertaining.

I was worried a little bit about the narration there and wondering whether I should take it out so I'm glad to hear that it worked instead of just making the chapter choppy.

I wanted to include Luna so badly in the first chapter and I managed to do it after staring at my screen for a very long time!

Thanks so much for the review!

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