Reading Reviews for Shades
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Review #1, by Hagrid21 Remus

25th August 2013:
When you say red and Remus, I think of him waking up after a transformation with blood on him, and he's left to worry about what he might have done the night before. Of course, for most of his life that was the case, waking up alone after a transformation.

I also think of his strong heart that had to go through so much. The emotional damage Remus has gone through far dwarfs any damage the wolve has caused.

This is really beautifully written and a really cool idea to base a story around. I look forward to the next character you do, whether you keep the Marauder theme or go another direction.

Author's Response: Again, thank you! With this particular color, there are so many important moments of Remus' life that come to mind. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #2, by Hagrid21 Sirius

21st August 2013:
This chapter was very nicely done. I like the theme of the color black playing a constant part in his life. Sirius and black definitely go together in more ways than one, as you illustrated in this story. I like how it progresses, starting with it being his last name, then as a color of something he's fixating on, and finally in how it represents darkness and loneliness and nothingness. Just really a great bit of writing. Great work

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! It was a connection that really stuck in my head and flowed really well. Thank you so much for your review and readership!!!

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