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Reading Reviews for Phantom from my past
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Review #1, by BluebirdBrigade The only one.

14th July 2013:
This was such a sweet and beautiful story filled with heartache and trust issues and James constantly trying win Lily back. I like the way you wrote about Lily's hurt, it was really realistic and sad at the same time. I really felt for her and sympathised with her because of the betrayal she felt but at the same time I was rooting for James to win her back. I thought the dialogue was very strong, although maybe a little heavy, and you really brought humour and drama to the piece and I love the way it ended on a good note as I am a sucker for romance and you really brought the element of love along with a bit of scandal which had me so intrigued.

Really loved this story, it was a very exciting read and I'm so glad that John was pushed out of the picture and James got back in ahah :P


Author's Response: Hello Maz :)
First off I'm glad you enjoyed my story. Yeah. I personally found John annoying too, which is very weird of me because its a character I created. :P

Dialogue, yes. I always thought dialogue was my strength. And so, yeah. I do tend to over do it a bit. I focus on my 'drama' element through it.
Its James and lily. It HAD to have that lovey-dovey sort of ending. I wouldn't imagine it another way. :p. I initially decided to write this piece because I wanted to write a stroy with an happy ending.

Thanks, again. :)

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