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Review #1, by avidpotterreader The Ball

26th July 2013:
omg all so fast! great quick read!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review (:

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Review #2, by DracoFerret11 The Ball

14th July 2013:
Hello there! This was such a nice story! So, let's go over things:

Plot: How cute! Normally I'm not one to read fluffy one-shots, but this was really adorable. I liked the idea of choosing whose love potion would be her date. Clever. And just to confirm: so, by the end of the night, the potion HAD worn off? So they really did have feelings for each other? I think so. :) Cute.

Characterization: I wonder if Hermione would really be the type to drink a love potion...but it's okay. I can accept that for the story. I was really sad about everyone who'd died during the war, but it worked. And Hermione was believable. I would have liked to read more about how their night went, though!

Descriptions: I think more details about how things looked, sounded, smelled, etc. could really have brought me into the story more. It was hard to imagine and I really would have loved to be able to picture the ball more.

Emotions: I would have liked to hear more about how the war affected Hermione and about how her feelings for Draco. That would have been great. :)

Overall, I think you did a good job. I love Dramione. :)

--Emily

Author's Response: Haha thank you so much for feedback! this was just a short little thing while working on other Dramione. But yes, the potion had wore off and she had feeling for him (:

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Review #3, by WelchieChick The Ball

12th July 2013:
Honestly... I was a bit disappointed. You had an AMAZING idea and you could've done so much with it! Personally, I would've liked more description on who, what, when and, well, pretty much everything. You could've totally made this into a 5-star novel or at least a very captivating novella. However, I am a sucker for Dramiones and it really was a great idea. :)

Author's Response: I have a Dramione that I fell in love with while writing, called do you trust me. Just waiting FOREVER to publish. Thanks for the review!

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Review #4, by Rebecca The Ball

10th July 2013:
I loved how you didn't tell who you were
going with until the end! Awesome!

Author's Response: I thought it would make it more interesting (: Thanks for the review!

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