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Review #1, by ATLpaintingflowers Chapter One

9th August 2013:
Hey you won 3rd Place!
So this story is absolutely amazing and I love it. I love your main character she was a joy to read. Poor Aphrodite having James trying to set her up on a date when she herself has a crush on him. I loved this plot, it very cute and funny and very well done. (please update soon) the characterization was good, all the characters were believable and well developed. Anyways thanks for trying out the challenge you did awesome.

Author's Response: Heya,

Squee!! :) (Thank you!)

I'm glad you like Aphrodite, she's really fun to write as is James. Updates may not be for a while as I'm trying to focus on two of my other stories.

Thank you for reading and reviewing, and I'm glad you like the plot and think all the characters are believable. I enjoyed the challenge and I love Skins!!

-Potterfan310
Soph :)



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Review #2, by MC_HK Chapter One

10th July 2013:
Hello there :)

Your story has really great potential. I get a very 'Mean Girls' vibe about it :) The dialogue is hilarious and I like how descriptive you are. I do think this works well with the plot and sets a lot of things up for future chapters. Each character's personality is very bold and stands out, making them each unique in their own respect.

The flow is good, but it's not as smooth as it could be. I feel like you jump around a lot with your ideas and then you rush through them to get back to the main story line. Maybe clump up a few of the intermediate ideas and wait a little longer before inserting another one. There are also a lot of words missing, and some of your grammar is off. I suggest using a quick beta on the chapter to help point out the grammatical and spelling errors here. There are also a lot of repetitive words, so I would go through it carefully and change some of those, as that also kind of falters the flow of the chapter.

Other than that, I did enjoy reading this. It made me laugh (which is always a good thing) and I find it very fun to read. Good job :) I look forward to reading more, MC_HK

Author's Response: Hello :)

I'm glad you like their personalities, I wasn't to sure how they would come across.

I got that feeling as well, but I wasn't too sure. I'll be sure to look for one!!

Thank you for your review, it was really helpful!!!

-Potterfan310
Soph :)


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